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Tuesday, April 1, 2008

A Mystery Girl !?!

I am a member of class 6a, we study at AIS. There are a lot of good students in my class. We also have sensitive students, I am proud of my class-6a. I want to tell the story that happened to our class when the first time we moved to the new school.


When we were very pleased with our new school. Since we moved to the new school, my good friend-S. she began talking wildly to herself. Some of my friend in 6a thought that she was a crazy girl, some of us thought that maybe she was sad about something that she wanted to tell us. Her parents also knew that, too. So they sent her to the hospital and took care of her, they were very worried. But S. tried to explain that she was not talking to herself or crazy, but she was talking with a girl which was 1 year older than us. She was good looking, her name was T., she looked like a normal girl but S. didn’t know why nobody saw her. She also said that T. wanted to has a good family. After that, she slept and T. soul possessed S. so T. made a strange things like called S.‘s mom is aunt. At that night T. went out of S. body. And now her parents had believed her and they were really, really worried.

They and their neighbors began to discuss about S.’s story and thought about their house place and S.’s school place before. They found the information on Internet, they read article on old newspaper. Finally, P. - the good and the cleverest person figured out that 50 years ago there was a family living at her school place. They were a family four people but T’s father was mental-illed. He killed his daughter –T., luckily T. had time to hide her brother front of the church. Her mother already passed away years ago. Then S. turn back to school and S.’s parents told us the story, they wanted us to help them. They didn’t tell S. yet.

We scared when we learned that news. We told S. about T.’s story. With the help of all students in my class, we found the place where the body of T had been placed. We asked the priest to come and did some rituals for her so that her spirit could go to a peaceful place.

All of us thought that T. went to the peaceful place already. But few days later, when we were playing in class, T. appeared front of us, now I could see her. S. was right, she was a good looking girl but all her skin was blue- extremely terrible. But this time she returned was the evil spirit, she flew in the air with a knife on her hand. She had the power, she threw the knife to A. – a student at school. A. died, we were very scared. Then she disappeared with the cruel laugh. Everything suddenly flew into the air liked T. had he magic, the lights turned off. Finally everything was put down gently, when the light turned on again, we saw a priest has been there. We thanked the priest so much, he liked a great god had a great power saved the world. Since that time, we have never seen T. again.
The story has 563 words.
Sorry , I can't write the full name of the characters.